Second Cut

 My group put in a lot of big changes into the opening. We brought a list of major critiques and tried to revamp as much as possible. Since Kayla is in charge of editing, she added more sound into the beginning to keep the tone consistent. I dressed in all black, smudged makeup under my eyes, and brought a bigger knife in order to make my character a more convincing serial killer. Along with this, we were able to tie Skyler and Olivia to a tree in order to make them look more like dead bodies. There was some tweaking in terms of angles and we made an effort to incorporate faster cuts.